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    dots Submission Name: Take a minute in my minddots
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    Author: Silenced poet
    ASL Info:    21/male/oregon
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 52/41/21
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 1090
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    dotsTake a minute in my minddots
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    Another piece of the puzzle of life falls into place. The edges are all done, time to fill in the rest. Life is a count down, T-minus your conception and counting, time to go into this world the same way we all hope to go out, naked and screaming! "you can bomb the world to pieces bu you cant bomb it into peace."-Michael Franti There is no pain like the present yet no sarrow quite like the past. Ah, fuck it........................




    Submitted on 2006-05-31 17:06:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the feeling i have ([censored] IT) . im guessing u and the government rnt rly friends. i like it
    --Xat
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by kantvnh | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this i have no idea why but i do probly because it sounds like some of my rant poetry i used to write. back when it was worth it to give a damn. lol. the imagry was wonderful.
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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