A Child
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A Child
his eyes shine with love and hope but he doesn't know what this world that is so dangerous and beautiful has in store for him love hate friendship jealousy he has no idea what is to become of him and he had no choice in the matter but then again none of us did and we love our life most of the time just as he shall if GOD wills because he will be set free in this crazy world not knowing who to trust who to love and who to savor before they're gone he's so innocent without a clue and I envy him but at the same time I pity him |
Submitted on 2006-05-31 17:29:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| yooo dis is awsomely awsome and true was u looking at toxic slime when u rote dis? | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ] | This is so true | In this write you are describing how the Innocense of youth becomes corrupted by people It is so sad but yet so true How I wish I could have stayed a youth my Whole Life I know thru experience how easily one can be led down the path of negativity You wrote this very well I look forward to reading more writes from you God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron | Posted on 2006-05-31 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | Awsome it is really awsome | You know it is so true too. This kid you talk about he has no clue what's in store for him but yet he still goes Peace Fana | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ] | This is an interesting poem. I like the idea behind it.It is unique. | | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by Anti-Emo | [ Reply to This ] | I really liked this poem. As I read it I pictured it being written for an innocent child, perhaps even a baby just born. Having wonder in its eyes and eager to grow up in the world. Maybe a parent writting this for the child knowing there are so many things in this world that can make them hurt and there's only so much a parent can do to protect. Overall it was very enjoyable to read, keep writing! :) | ~cris~ | Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by my_worst_fear85 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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