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    dots Submission Name: Schwing Schwingdots
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    Author: rapius
    ASL Info:    16/m/?
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 72/89/39
    Words: 257
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 155
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1581



    Description:
       This is a parody of the Swing Swing, played by my band BJ's in the Balls. If you want to check it out, it should be up on our myspace account soon. Just look up BJ's in the Balls.


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    dotsSchwing Schwingdots
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    Just in case you didn't read the description, this is a parody to the song Swing, Swing by All American Rejects.... Don't think I'm dissing them... I just thought it'd be cool to make a parody and I love how they sing their songs.


    She's coming onto me
    Without a single care
    I'm breathin heavily
    She flips up her hair
    I've tried so hard
    Not to get hard
    But my dick has been a retard

    She points it out and I cry,
    Even though it is long
    'Cause I 'm looking at her thigh,
    Her thong fell down
    I'll hide mine for now

    Schwing, schwing schwing in the middle of
    The room, As we start to make love
    Can you find some time for us
    To make love once again

    I'm sitting in the hall
    She looks my way
    She winks her eye at me
    Every since that day
    She and I had screwed
    Now, she is glued
    To me and I don't know what to do

    She likes to bang once a day
    I'm almost all out of juice
    And she knows every way
    For me to produce
    I'm going to die

    Schwing, schwing schwing in the middle of
    The room, As we start to make love
    Can you find some time for us
    To make love once again



    Schwing, schwing schwing in the middle of
    The room, As we start to make love
    Can you find some time for us
    To make love once again




    Submitted on 2006-05-31 18:04:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I did find this lyrics funny eventhough I don't know the song.
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by Lana | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow that is hilarious! Hahaha. Great job keeping the words in a flow that goes along with the beat of the original song. Keep up the good work. We all need a good laugh once in a while
    | Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, not many comments for this, huh? Well I think it is funny, especially since I do not like the All American Rejects. I think you wrote a nice twist. A bit perverted, but still the writes that inspire laughter usually are. :D
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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