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In Love with You

Author: Gmann
ASL Info:    19/M/WA
Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 98 /125 /73
Words: 138
Class/Type: Personal Quotes /Love
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In Love with You

I never really knew you,
You were just another friend,
But when I got to know you,
I let mixed feelings mend.

I couldn't help past memories,
That would only make me cry,
I have to forget my first love,
And give love another try.

So I've fallen in love with you,
And I'll never let you go,
I love you more then anyone,
I just had to let you know.

And if you ever wonder why,
I don't know what I'll say,
But I'll never stop loving you,
Each and everyday.

My love for you will never change,
Please know my feelings are true,
Just remember one thing,
I'm in love with you.

Submitted on 2006-06-01 01:39:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this is a good poem and i like how u got the words to come out not many ppl can do good love poems and this is just a sweet one i hope u r great and yeah
all the love
| Posted on 2006-06-02 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]
  aaw hun this was sweet, i hope u did tell this person how u felt, cos it would have been a great loss on thier part,
keep em cummin
| Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
  it's so cute...
it's the loved and lost perspective and how much it means to you...
truly insightful
kind of makes you wonder of what love does for a person
| Posted on 2006-07-06 00:00:00 | by sailorliones | [ Reply to This ]

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