He is the One

Author: babytinkerbelle ASL Info:    26/f/aus Elite Ratio:    5.25 - 310 /209 /42 Words: 110

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He is the One

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When we met We were both unsure Of what we wanted One year on And now I know It was you That I was waiting for I don’t believe In fate I don’t believe In love at first sight It has taken many months For me to trust you It has taken many months To finally see the truth You are the one To take away the pain You are the one To help me trust again We’ve both been through a lot And at times, it’s not easy But if we stick together I know we’ll make it through

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If Only It Was That Easy I Wish Love Was This Simple But It Seems You Gotta Fight For Love I Hope You And Your Boyfriend Are Still Goin Strong Love Stacey

| Posted on 2007-07-23 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]

Tink First let me say how Happy I am to see your name Again I missed you so much How are you doing? I hope and Pray everything is ok In this write I see you have found a soulmate You have not rushed into this and it seems this one is your Soulmate for Life Remain Strong and Positive Tink If you EVER EVER need someone to Talk to Please know Im always here God Bless Your Friend Always Ron

| Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

I liked this poem ok. It was a nice poem to read about love and not about heartbreak that are usually posted. Something different and it was nice. ~Christina aka POETRY

| Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]

Isn't it great to finally find the one? The one to take away the pain..the one to help you trust. Finding that person is the most amazing feeling in the world, and once we have it we need to hang onto it. Even when it's hard...it's just like you said, couples just need to stick together and make it through. thanks for writing this..reminded me of my man and my love...great write. ~hailie~

| Posted on 2006-06-09 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]

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