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    dots Submission Name: He is the Onedots
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    Author: babytinkerbelle
    ASL Info:    26/f/aus
    Elite Ratio:    5.25 - 310/209/42
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663



    Description:
       A poem for my boyfriend, it's going to need some work so I'll probably repost soon. Anyway thoughts and feed back will be greatly appreciated.


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    dotsHe is the Onedots
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    When we met
    We were both unsure
    Of what we wanted

    One year on
    And now I know
    It was you
    That I was waiting for

    I don’t believe
    In fate
    I don’t believe
    In love at first sight

    It has taken many months
    For me to trust you
    It has taken many months
    To finally see the truth

    You are the one
    To take away the pain
    You are the one
    To help me trust again

    We’ve both been through a lot
    And at times, it’s not easy
    But if we stick together
    I know we’ll make it through




    Submitted on 2006-06-01 05:54:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      If Only It Was That Easy
    I Wish Love Was This Simple
    But It Seems You Gotta Fight For Love
    I Hope You And Your Boyfriend Are Still Goin Strong
    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-23 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      Tink
    First let me say how Happy I am to see your name Again
    I missed you so much
    How are you doing?
    I hope and Pray everything is ok
    In this write I see you have found a soulmate
    You have not rushed into this and it seems this one is your Soulmate for Life
    Remain Strong and Positive Tink
    If you EVER EVER need someone to Talk to Please know Im always here
    God Bless
    Your Friend Always
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this poem ok. It was a nice poem to read about love and not about heartbreak that are usually posted. Something different and it was nice.

    ~Christina aka POETRY
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
      Isn't it great to finally find the one? The one to take away the pain..the one to help you trust. Finding that person is the most amazing feeling in the world, and once we have it we need to hang onto it. Even when it's hard...it's just like you said, couples just need to stick together and make it through. thanks for writing this..reminded me of my man and my love...great write. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2006-06-09 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]



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