Description: this poem is just an experiment. im gonna write a better one, its backwards but the second and fourth lines are backwards in a different way. its weird. if you cant figure it out, tell me. but really try.
i kinda feel this way about religion, and in te church of satin, they say the lorsd prayer backwards before every service. this isnt why i wrote the poem this way though.
well sum1 peed in your cheerios today didnt they ghost? i thought it was interesting, not so much because you were trying to be "clever" as much, but because the fact that everything was backwards kind of emphasized your confusion. it said a lot in so few words its kool i like it
wo! wierd,yet interesting in a nice and funny way. The wierdness of how it is written cleverly emphasises the confusion and feelings....hehehe nice try. Look fwd to reading some more like that
not really sure what you were going for with this. sure it's all backwards. i knew it as soon as i read the title. it's not that tricky. it doesn't take a brainiac to figure it out. mind you, i guess we're not dealing with a bunch of geniuses here so if you were striving for clever........ah f.uck it.
i thought this was lame. and the wAy It WaS WrItTeN reminded me of a whitish thuggish mtv-ish thing to do. and to make matters worse, all that time you spent f.ucking about with organization you could have spent on putting the apostrophe in 'can't' in the right place.
sing songing hate me. cos i love it.
i just hate clever people because they're so obvious in their candor. and that's just god damn annoying..
i sometimes think people are too clever with the structure of their poems because they are lacking with their words. maybe. maybe not.
Submission Name: Backwards
