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    dots Submission Name: Would IT...dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 839
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       I'm bored @ work & I lose patience with people who can seriously talk about what goes on in the world as reality yet cannot begin to fathom anything else...frustrating, close minded and sadly ignorant...sorry had to bust out some pissiness there! Love, Peace, Joy!!!

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    dotsWould IT...dots

    Would it seem
    crazy if I said
    God talks
    to me
    through nature, books
    And IT whisphered
    sometimes IT screamed:
    Love as
    light inside all
    Would IT seem
    silly if I said
    His plan
    for us
    is simple, honest
    IT engulfs us
    all and everything;
    all around
    not just from
    Would IT seem
    ironic if I said
    darkness was
    too Light
    searching, wanting
    Evil only human
    live and attitude
    misery a
    frame of mind
    Would it seem
    insane if I floated
    above all
    freedom found
    in the call....

    Submitted on 2004-05-12 16:38:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      whoa, I'm surprised, your not always love, peace, and happiness. It's nice to see this side of you, and i'm happy to say for you that this is just a side, and not your basis. as for craziness, can you tell me who's "normal"? And reality is nothing more than a compromised dedution of perspectives, based on the rule of majority. and to be truelly open-minded one must be understanding(not necessarily tolerant) of those who aren't. great piece
    | Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      No, it wouldn't seem crazy.
    Good job, a few minor errors, but good job overall.
    | Posted on 2004-05-12 00:00:00 | by ACircuitShock | [ Reply to This ]

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