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    dots Submission Name: Make Me Crazy...dots
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    Author: kristian
    ASL Info:    30/male/modesto, ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 71/44/29
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 805
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1414



    Description:
       THIS WRITE IS ABOUT A GIRL I WILL FOREVER BE IN LOVE WITH AND HOW AT THE TIME I DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO LET HER GO. WHICH GOT UGLY. GAVE ME A BAD REP. BUT IT WASN'T ME THAT WAS CRAZY. IT WAS MY BEHAVIOR AND SENCE THEN I HAVE LEARNED U CANT MAKE SOMEONE LOVE U


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    dotsMake Me Crazy...dots
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    Make Me CrAzY

    You painted this picture of me
    Made me crazy for everyone to see
    telling lies that you love me- uncoditional and faithfully
    But you were gone and i was here alone
    I lost it not cause you were gone
    but because i belived the lies that came from you,
    not understanding why they contradicted the truth

    Now im the crazy one- insomniac can't get nothing done
    rather lie awake in bed
    then risk the demons that stalk my dreams

    You were the one who led me to the gun
    with a bullet and a case with my name
    you painted this picture now its time to frame
    So scrape me off the wall
    and call me crazy like you made me

    Another hour, another day,
    another injection to the veins
    criminal induced thoughts of the insane

    Now i see the lies and i see the fright
    And i see it shining through my eyes tonight
    CAN YOU HEAR MY SCREAMS?
    CAN YOU FEEL MY PAIN?
    You painted this picture now watch it hang
    And scrape me off the wall
    and call me crazy like you made me

    You were the one who led me to the gun
    I loved you, I'm the crazy one

    So scrape me off the wall
    and call me crazy like you made me

    kristian







    Submitted on 2006-06-01 13:57:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a insane Powerful poem, I loved it, it was like I saw everything, the way it was put. It would be crazy if I made a girl feel like this and they committed suicide, this is a great peace of poetry, way to go.
    | Posted on 2006-06-02 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz i loved this, i saw it more as lyrics, its all kool,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      WoW! This is a powerful poem.
    I like it, I'm glad your not giving this to me.
    I 'd hate to be the one to make you feel this way. good work.
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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