Description: My school has a server. The district has a disfunctional one. Observations of a Human Machine.
Apple talk -------------------------------------------
Pinpricks of apple skin flash on
and off
and on again
Glowing green like venom
Like toxic waste
A malicious stoplight
On a road no longer traveled
Blinking on
And off
And on again
Snickering
Can't you hear them?
Sneering at us
Little holes filled with the all-nothing
The light
Pinpricks of malevolence
Blink on
And off
And on again
Through an Amazon of blue cords
Grotesquely vibrant
In a world not ever meant to see
Such story-book-vivid color
Rotten stars
Super novas
Polka dots
Hollow eyes of killers
Blink on
And off
And on again
Too quickly
Too much
Over-load
A rapid convulsion of virtual requiem
On
Off
On
Ha ha! That is really hilarious! I love satire, and you did it really well. The rhythm is flawless. I absolutely adore this. I can't comment on things I like. I just gush. So . . . *gush*. -HaldirLives
*sight* i hate you. it was good, i know you can do better, you seemed to have a theme in the beginning but then it kinda deminishes after a while and it goes off on another track which... is a little confusesing. But other than that, o and you had a nice sequence of the on off on and on again, and then it changed, i dont know... but it just didnt seem to fit very well... i think if you wanted to change the sequence it would have been better to change the world like, life death, light dark, opposites like that or something. I liked it, not my fav, but its good! ~Shadow
Submission Name: Apple talk
