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    dots Submission Name: How Soon the Extraordinary Becomes Banaldots
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    Author: Peacelizzy
    ASL Info:    26/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 14/15/9
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 90
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       I've never submitted before so... be gentle! This was just a musing I had, I know it's not the greatest but hope you find it interesting.


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    dotsHow Soon the Extraordinary Becomes Banaldots
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    How soon the extraordinary becomes banal
    I reflect as I walk alongside the canal
    That I once thought pretty
    And yet now barely see.

    If it takes ten seconds to open a web-page
    We are prone to complain and fly into a rage
    Thus dormant indifference
    ‘Comes active impatience.

    But most dangerous of all complacencies, I say
    Is to forget the merits of a person and pay
    With loneliness and pain.
    So don’t be afraid to love every day.




    Submitted on 2006-06-03 14:09:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      True feelings, and I do agree, we all want the internet now, like yesterday, money faster then that, and love forever. Too bad it's not like that in the real world. Maybe more people should write poetry and realize how good things are, and then read your poetry to enjoy what they have. Very good write.
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by man_in_PA | [ Reply to This ]



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