Well, I do see the humor in this. "Soft Whispers on the Skin What I give to you" If there was never a description, I just might wander my thoughts to an image more sensual that was never supposedly so. I can't say it was a drag for the last few lines b/c I saw it coming- so then I knew what it was about. So even though it wasn't the most imaginative, descriptive, sincere and humorous, it still made me smile and laugh a little. I liked the whole idea of it. I still think the beginning was the best though-- great introduction-- the beginning deserves 5 stars! -stacey M.-
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