i cut myself to feel alive
for this pain to go away i strive
the difference between now and then
how i will never be the same again
that blood stained blade upon my shelf
a portriat of my former self
the lack of will
the lack of care
the cut so deep it brought a death scare
the way i feel
is anything but real
im on cloud nine
and no i wont be fine
the feeling that uve lost it all
how u will forever fall
i have finnaly answered the deaths call
but then again who is there
to find someone is very rare
but then again who will care
if im gone or if i stay
ill do watever it takes for this pain to go away
live life day by day
but no more days left to live the end is near
because of death i do not fear
This is good I do feel you forced your rhymes in a few places but you definately spoke truth with this one I too know thru experiences in the past how cutting makes one feel I thank God every day for bringing me the Light so I never fall back to depression againVery Well Worded God Bless Ron
And Welcome to Elite Skills I hope this site brings you all the joy it has brought to me Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
Submission Name: Cutterz
