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    Author: $tefano
    ASL Info:    14 male new york
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 2/4/9
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHERdots
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    ive got "her" on my mind
    that special someone who is way to kind
    straight into my heart like a bullet from a gun
    like "her" there is no one
    i cant have "her"
    no matter how hard i try
    teary eyed on the verge of starting to cry
    i try over and over again to forget
    not telling her sooner i always regret
    but it is to late now
    to let how
    i truly feel out
    sexy in cotton silk wool or leather
    be there for "her" any weather
    kiss "her" in the rain
    to take away "her" pain
    roll around in the snow
    just to let "her" know
    protect her from the hail
    our love wont fail
    but all these things these thoughts these words
    its too late now gave up hope
    "she" is a true beauty
    total 150% cutie
    cant get "her" out of my head
    too late contemplating the things i shoulda said
    but forget it all
    tryin lost its meanin
    i am destined to fall




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