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Forbidden Love

Author: shambolic
ASL Info:    19.Female.Mozchester
Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 10 /11 /15
Words: 48
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Just watched 'Wilde' and was amazed by its brilliance. I already loved the works of Oscar Wilde and knew his story but watching the film furthered it.

Forbidden Love

A mind
Captivated by the forbidden
Flowering in the dark.
Growing stronger and
Breaking boundaries

A mind
Embracing the forbidden
Blooming wildly.
Encapsulating a spark
A flame

A mind
Engulfed by the forbidden
Open fruition.
Tender and

Submitted on 2006-06-03 19:05:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love it. It's straight forward and wonderfully expressive at the same time
| Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Freespyryt554 | [ Reply to This ]

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