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    dots Submission Name: the habits kicked medots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 647/1087/624
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    I found you by the glowing tip of your self-mutilation
    Being here just makes me feel like I've given up
    Now we have to face ourselves as enemies, and forget our promises and resolutions
    We won't change, we never do
    And I'll go along with it because you're one of the few people left that will smile at me
    So lets go, lets go ruin ourselves and hide behind our old solutions

    They said we could try something new, but me and you aren't risk-takers or habit breakers
    We're only good at breaking a few things like hearts and promises
    So lets go, lets leave ourselves, forget ourselves, and make us into strangers we won't remember later
    Thats something we're good at

    You guys are dirty, and pathetic but you're loyal and that means something
    Not much when you're sleeping on the floor and eating rice 7 times a week
    But something
    We fell into our phase and let ourselves degrade
    And when we saw it we tried to pretend it was our purpose

    Its not a revolution, being useless, we could have helped ourselves, we had the truth, we could have used it




    Submitted on 2006-06-03 22:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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