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    dots Submission Name: My Baby Girl's Gonedots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 118
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       why drunk drivers shouldnt get off easy


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    dotsMy Baby Girl's Gonedots
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    i remember a faint sound,
    a familiar voice singing.
    the sound of a lullaby,
    my sweet baby grinning.

    the rememberance of her eyes,
    so bright shining blue,
    i'd sooth her crying,
    so i'd coo and coo.

    i sit on my bed and think,
    is she really gone..?
    i bit my lip as a tear falls down,
    as i start to sing a sweet song.

    i pick up her blanket,
    hold it in my arms.
    bounce the blanket alittle,
    hopeing to see her sweet charms.

    i stare at the article,
    hung on my wall.
    a teen drunk driver,
    at least 6 feet tall.

    late at night,
    coming home from the store,
    as i drove forward on green,
    he hit the right back door.

    i screamed,
    i cried,
    he ran,
    ...she died.

    after a few years of life,
    now gone in a flash,
    he paid his dues,
    in just a few 100 in cash...





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