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    dots Submission Name: Never Any Proofdots

    Author: Ensult
    ASL Info:    19/Male/New York
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 115/114/31
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Ideas that never reach paper. Beautiful songs that are never written. We've all had a time in our life where our best work just could never come out.

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    dotsNever Any Proofdots

    The Greatest words of all time never reach a sheet of paper
    The best stories to be told
    And poems to be read
    Remain trapped in a brain
    What a coincidence how theres never a pen or paper available
    The basis of history and roots of time were never recorded
    Life of the caveman
    Invention of fire
    Where a cell comes from
    The true beginning of time and life
    If words then were written we wouldn't have questions now
    That song that hits you in the shower
    The freestyle that no ones around to hear
    The poem that comes to you walking down the street
    Discoveries are made everyday but the best still remain hidden

    Submitted on 2004-05-12 19:53:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very agreeable poem. We all have the issues of this. And it's sad... especially with all the technology and stores that sell a notebook and pen. Also, your writing is very easy to read and understand. I give it an A.
    | Posted on 2005-04-12 00:00:00 | by Isaac | [ Reply to This ]
      this is sooo true, every time i realy have something worth writting i never have a piece of paper or pencil anywhere near, i love singing, and song writting and the good stuff always comes to me when im working or havnt got anything to put it onto. thanx for sharing this, at least you managed to keep this good piece and put it to good use x x x x
    | Posted on 2005-04-11 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      TO, i feel this poem is the true anthem for all writers, whether you write poetry or not, you can relate to this piece. It shows us that even if we might not come out on top, it is more important to express all our art. If kept hidden, it may never see the light of day. This piece of yours is flawless to me. It guides me so i never lose sight of why it is i write in the first place. For me and only me.
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by TremendoCulo16 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I agree with everyword you said in this poem. It was definatly an eye catcher. I really enjoyed reading it. It flowed nicely and got me thinking, and I'm lazy, so not many things get me thinking. I especially liked the line 'If words then were written we wouldn't have questions now' It stood out the most to me...anyways, great wirte...keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2004-05-12 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes...Finally someone who has my same idea...These words that are never written remain for the future...There are poems that are so great that remain in the brain, and they haven't yet been brought onto paper...So many poems and writes that are awaiting there creation but we humans can write an ininitive amount of time...And truthfully it sounds as if we were on the same track, yes the best discoveries remain undiscovered...Just imagine though if we can place our best 100% potential into a poem our maximum potential, but there is no maximum potenetial for there is no end in creating, it just gets better as you excel at it...Nice write +1 to my favorites
    | Posted on 2004-05-12 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really great. I forget the best stuff when I'm stopped at a stoplight or something.
    | Posted on 2004-05-13 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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