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Author: Fraser
ASL Info:    26
Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30 /55 /35
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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escaping everyday life


Dig a hole alll the way to China
dig and dig to escape what is final
pop your head up in this upside down world
adjust your vision to the roundness of the globe
let the peace of the east surround your spirit
let the west go away and your ears never hear it
where a cone on you're top and practise asian ways
squint your eyes to the sloping mountains and trees
escape, escape to a new country side
change everything about you from the outside

Submitted on 2006-06-04 16:16:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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