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    dots Submission Name: First Lovedots
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    Author: BigDreams
    ASL Info:    17, female,Ontario Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 32/27/18
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 578



    Description:
       My first horse really was my first true love. I wish I could have kept him.


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    dotsFirst Lovedots
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    First Love


    My first love
    wasn't hot, or nerdy.
    Wasn't muscular, or thin.
    Nor was he rich, or poor.

    He had big ears.
    Way to much hair.
    Feet of rock.
    Did I forget his tail?

    My first love was still perfect.

    He always listened, though never talked back.
    He protected me.
    And even through the hard times, he was there for me.

    My first love was a girls dream come true.
    He was the perfect first horse.

    First Love




    Submitted on 2006-06-04 19:26:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this poem very much
    good job
    | Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by Alexandra | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem. It is totally true. Horses rock. Love it.
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      Love it. Horses are the best. My best friend has two and we go riding all the time. I can't have one because I'm within the city limits. I love how you describe him and don't telll what he is until the very end. Keep up the good work. Byeyahs

    ~Lizzy
    | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by Lizzy B | [ Reply to This ]
      Well done on this piece you've really made me smile, thanks so much and well done.

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]



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