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Author: biffy2006
ASL Info:    18/f/N.I
Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 25 /16 /9
Words: 50
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Average Vote:    1.0000
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never



I never been so happy with life
I never smiled so much in one night
I was never so happy with my life
Before you said you loved me
I never had a better time
I never felt so straigth in line
Until i knew you loved me





Submitted on 2006-06-04 20:56:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It is a special moment, and a experience that cannot be bought. I like it .

Candale-Switch
| Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by Candale-Switch | [ Reply to This ]


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