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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: skittls
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    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       By Brianne


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    dotsLovedots
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    The day i finally met you, my heart was beating fast. I didnt want to look back at the other loves in the past.

    I knew you are always here for me, even when we fight, but i dont think we ever will after what happened that night.

    I try and try to forget the past and the bad things that go by. But sometimes i just want to lay down on my bed to cry.

    I'm really happy with you now, no hurt or sad tears. I will always be here waiting for you, through all these loveing years.




    Submitted on 2006-06-04 21:15:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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