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    dots Submission Name: Stonedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsStonedots
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    I've done it.
    Done it all.
    Done it all before.
    I've repressed more memories
    than are usually
    contained in ten brains.
    Been so low
    that worms seemed like birds.
    Felt more pain than a flagellant saint.
    Loved more souls than an army should.
    Lived more in my life
    Than my small yellow body can show .
    I look young, but my soul
    is old,
    my soul is stone.






    Submitted on 2004-01-24 04:40:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Another beautiful one.... and what an ending. My soul is stone. Wow. I can definitely relate to this one. Have felt that way more times than I'd like to admit.
    | Posted on 2004-01-25 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]
      you've done it again. great!
    | Posted on 2004-01-24 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this one cuz of the feeling you put in each short line, you put more in each one that seems possable, it makes me think of an Iron giant to be honest. this is true feeling
    | Posted on 2004-01-24 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      if your soul is stone then it cannot be ripped from your body and eaten!
    'happy people have no stories'
    | Posted on 2004-01-24 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]


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