Somewhere Beneath The Sidewalk System -------------------------------------------
Hell comes to grab hold of your sullen expression
Tear away, scene by scene
The thoughts inside that scream
Look my direction and donate a spleen
A gentleman agrees to disagree with me
Stapled to the ground
Disturbing sounds from a video
Summer causes me to pant
Dangling sufferance not met with complete tests
Your end is near (and my penis can prove it)
Undertow sown from the depths of ashes foreknown
"Jolly good!" and "Cheerio!"
Statements I take too seriously
Indeed, there will be freight trains ahead
Indeed, my feet are sore
Mother you've forsaken me
The street tastes like apricot jam
An interesting array of......various things. Though I find it confusing, I see the beauty in the chaos amid the variety. Good job. I'd really like you to tell me the story behind it, if you don't mind.
Tear away, scene by scene The thoughts inside that scream Look my direction and donate a spleen
What are you serious what a waste of human life! Spleen were you dropped on your head when you wrote this! If not I advise you too! My son can write a better poem then this time waster delete quick!
Sounds like a badtrip to me... When some total jibberish just runs through your mind and you don't know how to stop it. Despite what Cordell said, I actually like this. It's different.
Submission Name: Somewhere Beneath The Sidewalk System
