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    dots Submission Name: Somewhere Beneath The Sidewalk Systemdots
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    Author: The Imbroglio
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 35/53/34
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    dotsSomewhere Beneath The Sidewalk Systemdots
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    Hell comes to grab hold of your sullen expression
    Tear away, scene by scene
    The thoughts inside that scream
    Look my direction and donate a spleen
    A gentleman agrees to disagree with me
    Stapled to the ground
    Disturbing sounds from a video
    Summer causes me to pant
    Dangling sufferance not met with complete tests
    Your end is near (and my penis can prove it)
    Undertow sown from the depths of ashes foreknown
    "Jolly good!" and "Cheerio!"
    Statements I take too seriously
    Indeed, there will be freight trains ahead
    Indeed, my feet are sore
    Mother you've forsaken me
    The street tastes like apricot jam




    Submitted on 2006-06-05 11:55:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      An interesting array of......various things. Though I find it confusing, I see the beauty in the chaos amid the variety. Good job. I'd really like you to tell me the story behind it, if you don't mind.
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]
      Tear away, scene by scene
    The thoughts inside that scream
    Look my direction and donate a spleen

    What are you serious what a waste of human life! Spleen were you dropped on your head when you wrote this! If not I advise you too! My son can write a better poem then this time waster delete quick!
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like a badtrip to me... When some total jibberish just runs through your mind and you don't know how to stop it. Despite what Cordell said, I actually like this. It's different.
    | Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by silverfragment | [ Reply to This ]


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