Thought it was deep and that it got the meaning across, a meaning that I think is very true. I liked the parrelisms(may have spelt that wrong) and the comparisons- they gave it deeper meaning, at least for me
few grammer mistakes need attention but enjoyed the right. In a dualistic world there does seem to be a lack of fairness. You got your point across really well. Some poignant thought provoking points in this piece that got my brain juices flowing.