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Author: biffy2006
ASL Info:    18/f/N.I
Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 25 /16 /9
Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Alone
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i think everybody feels like this sometimes that you can be surrounded by people and still be alone


Have you ever felt so alone
Whilst in a room full of people
That you wished you could have flown
To be on top the highest steeple

Feeling that you dont belong
Whilst others talk and laugh
Wishing that the rest were gone
And your lonliness would half

Dont you find it strange
That while alone your not
But when people are in range
It seems you've been forgot

Submitted on 2006-06-05 18:42:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  enjoy this write but there are a few cheesy rhymes in this that could be exed do that and it will be grand okay

| Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by Dragon of Roses | [ Reply to This ]

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