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Would You? Can You?


Author: biffy2006
ASL Info:    18/f/N.I
Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 25 /16 /9
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Would You? Can You?



If you had the chance
Would you leave it all behind
Without a second glance
And expel it from your mind

A chance to start anew
to live the life you want
A whole new point of view
A whole new life to flaunt

It seems like such a dream
It seems so out of reach
It seems so extreme
Do we only get one chance each?




Submitted on 2006-06-05 18:51:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Just to correct a couple of spelling mistakes:

Without a *second* glance

and

A chance to start *anew* (not really a mistake, I think, but that way it sounds better)

Apart from that, I like your poem. It's quite simple but it sounds so dreamy... Don't we all wish to start a new life sometimes?
| Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by silverfragment | [ Reply to This ]


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