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Submission Name: untitled dots

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Author:	kissmystars
ASL Info:	20/F/NY
Elite Ratio:	3.16 - 4/5/7
Words:	352

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	991
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	697

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untitled dots

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Feet
placed
between
you and me

causing
every
falling
drop
of
rain
to BURN.
if we can't find the answer
does the question (not asked
or observed as existing)
even matter?

dripdropdripdropdripdrop
Oh, beautiful thunder, roll on
the sky has miles to go.

Submitted on 2006-06-06 11:32:28 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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