Description: yea... the doctors came for a check-up.... they said i should be dead.... no reason i should've recovered like this... i should've died.... 9 years and i havent died... why?
_/| A Mistake |_ -------------------------------------------
I never thought i'd make it out alive
and it's not what i expected
I already said all my good-byes
but i've been rejected
I feel my heartbeat
but i cant feel blood in my veins
i see these wounds bleeding
but there is no pain
I'm gonna die
but i'm still breathing
i stopped my heart
but it's still beating
These are the events
that created my life
and this is what it takes
to make me feel alive!
On 1997, August 24th
i was meant to die!
But here i am 9 years later
and i don't know why!
I shouldn't have lived
there's no life to make
God overlooked me
I'm his mistake
Woah! That last stanza was great. Powerful. Perhaps God just sees this person as an angel and not a demon...so He spared them from suicide simply for that reason...whatever the case may be...this persons heart still beats for all to see.
I cannot tell you how many times I have said & felt just what you have spoken of. Within the darkness you will find the light, just follow it until it covers you and eventually you will come to understand your purpose. Until then just know that God does not make mistakes you have a very powerful purpose and it has its own meaning. Denise
Wow this is really powerful piece. Is it true...? If so, ad if you want to, can you shar the story with me I would really like to haer it. If not I toatly understand. If this is just a metaphor for the way you feel, then I know I have been there before. But you will soon be able to find the light that will light your way. Take care of yourself.
I'm gonna die but i'm still breathing i stopped my heart but it's still beating
I think that was my favorite stanza. It struck me flat in the face, hit me hard. Especially the "I stopped my heart, but it's still beating". That has a lot of symbolism because you believe, or want to believe, that your heart has stopped beating because you feel so dead inside, but in reality you are alive, breathing and beating strong. At least, that's what I got out of it.
Submission Name: _/| A Mistake |_
