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i was bored but : Rap

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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hahaha iight i was bored but still tell me what u think lol.

i was bored but : Rap

iight iight....
yo my name is DePoetry
my game is rap
if u don't like my stuff
go and take a nap
i'm spitting easy set rhymes
just to pass my time
if u don't like what i'm sellin
get out of the line
iight i can't freestyle worth shit
but i'm ahead of the game
cause when i do write
it's the bomb so don't spit on my name
and i was in love three times
only one of 'em were true
so Braxton if u out there
know that i love you
anyways i'm so bored
so i'm explaining myself
messin around wit me
ain't good for yo health
you see i can fight
but mad peoples got my back
you wanted to figure me out
well despiper that
another thing u should know
is i got two brothers
everything i say goes in one ear
and goes out the other
those my homies though
and i love them to death
would write more about them
but there ain't nothing left
next is a guy
who really broke my heart
not that i liked him
but shit where do i start
he left me so confused
where do i start where do i go
it was supposed to be a secret
but everyone knows
iight people who talk shit
yes me and austin did fuck
but i'm not phased by what u say
and that's whats up
anyways what's good wats poppin
me rappin and writin ain't stoppin
but i'm out i gotta sleep
i'm leavin so peace..

Submitted on 2006-06-06 14:29:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was aight, you went right up my ally with talkin bout life I love reading that kinda [censored].. I'm very ready for a callobo witcha I got alot of [censored] to get off my chest too... I might put something like this out...
| Posted on 2006-06-09 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah u had way too much time on ur hands with this one. it was aight but i bet it felt good getting some of that [censored] off of ur chest.
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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