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    dots Submission Name: i was bored but : Rapdots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 939
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 1667



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       hahaha iight i was bored but still tell me what u think lol.


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    dotsi was bored but : Rapdots
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    iight iight....
    yo my name is DePoetry
    my game is rap
    if u don't like my stuff
    go and take a nap
    i'm spitting easy set rhymes
    just to pass my time
    if u don't like what i'm sellin
    get out of the line
    iight i can't freestyle worth shit
    but i'm ahead of the game
    cause when i do write
    it's the bomb so don't spit on my name
    and i was in love three times
    only one of 'em were true
    so Braxton if u out there
    know that i love you
    anyways i'm so bored
    so i'm explaining myself
    messin around wit me
    ain't good for yo health
    you see i can fight
    but mad peoples got my back
    you wanted to figure me out
    well despiper that
    another thing u should know
    is i got two brothers
    everything i say goes in one ear
    and goes out the other
    those my homies though
    and i love them to death
    would write more about them
    but there ain't nothing left
    next is a guy
    who really broke my heart
    not that i liked him
    but shit where do i start
    he left me so confused
    where do i start where do i go
    it was supposed to be a secret
    but everyone knows
    iight people who talk shit
    yes me and austin did fuck
    but i'm not phased by what u say
    and that's whats up
    anyways what's good wats poppin
    me rappin and writin ain't stoppin
    but i'm out i gotta sleep
    i'm leavin so peace..




    Submitted on 2006-06-06 14:29:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was aight, you went right up my ally with talkin bout life I love reading that kinda [censored].. I'm very ready for a callobo witcha I got alot of [censored] to get off my chest too... I might put something like this out...
    | Posted on 2006-06-09 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah u had way too much time on ur hands with this one. it was aight but i bet it felt good getting some of that [censored] off of ur chest.
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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