Chasing us across the valley.
Smiling down at horse and human.
Full of spirit and freedom.
Dancing around my peaceful face.
Hold on for dear life.
Matching the beat of is pounding hooves.
| No need to use any other word, it works as: Dancing around my face.Maybe, Dancing 'round my face.|
This may fit better with the following line:Hold on......
If not maybe change the line: Hold on for dear life.
Nice use of space. Nice poem.
|| Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by going_strong | [ Reply to This ] || i liked this i have a rescue horse that im taking care of and training so i can relate to what your saying in it and i liked it a lot. great work.||| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by gothfreak | [ Reply to This ] |