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Happy 6/6/6 Haiku 6-Pack


Author: Catalist
ASL Info:    27/M/MN
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I don't know, quickly-written Haiku's to celebrate the date!


Happy 6/6/6 Haiku 6-Pack



It's now 6/6/6
The day for superstitious
People to be scared!

I learned that the three
W's in web links are
Hebrew 6's too

And oddly enough
Viagra's Molecule Weight
Is 666 too

Though if you ask me
That lame drug is really just
For guys with no brains

I shall lay my claim
to this day of forboding
Beware my blossom

From pure innocence
Comes a force to reckon with
This darkness is ours

-Chrönis




Submitted on 2006-06-06 20:26:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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