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    dots Submission Name: Happy 6/6/6 Haiku 6-Packdots
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    Author: Catalist
    ASL Info:    27/M/MN
    Elite Ratio:    5.05 - 20/18/10
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1524
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    Bytes: 588



    Description:
       I don't know, quickly-written Haiku's to celebrate the date!


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    dotsHappy 6/6/6 Haiku 6-Packdots
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    It's now 6/6/6
    The day for superstitious
    People to be scared!

    I learned that the three
    W's in web links are
    Hebrew 6's too

    And oddly enough
    Viagra's Molecule Weight
    Is 666 too

    Though if you ask me
    That lame drug is really just
    For guys with no brains

    I shall lay my claim
    to this day of forboding
    Beware my blossom

    From pure innocence
    Comes a force to reckon with
    This darkness is ours

    -Chrönis




    Submitted on 2006-06-06 20:26:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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