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    dots Submission Name: Struggle to Breathedots
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    Author: AngelOutlaw
    ASL Info:    21/female/OR & WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 672/392/64
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
    Total Views: 1234
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1331



    Description:
       I wrote this for a friend of mine after I found out that he was going through a hard time. I just gave it to him Memorial weekend. Ironically, I had a really bad day yesterday and he was totally there for me. I got home and read this in my journal and thought, "God is so faithful and so amazing. Something that I wrote for someone suffering, now, after that same person had enough strength to help me, is encouraging me."


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    dotsStruggle to Breathedots
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    It breaks my heart to see you broken. It
    Tears me up inside to see you torn down.
    If it hurts me this much to see you hurting,
    I can't imagine the pain you must feel.
    I hate the thought that you might hate life. I'm
    No longer strong when I see you lose you
    Strength. I can't take a breath when I see you
    Struggle to breathe.

    Don't lose hope yet, please.
    I'm down on my knees,
    And I'm taking you the Lamb,
    Praying He'll take you by the hand.
    I know that He hears,
    Because He's counted every tear
    As you struggle to breathe.

    Tears run down my face when I see your eyes
    Red from crying. I cannot face the world
    When I know that the only way for you
    To survive is to sleep away the day.
    If it hurts me this much to see you hurting,
    I can't imagine the pain you must feel,
    And I can't take a breath when I see you
    Struggle to breathe.

    Don't lose hope yet, please.
    I'm down on my knees,
    And I'm taking you the Lamb,
    Praying He'll take you by the hand.
    I know that He hears,
    Because He's counted every tear
    As you struggle to breathe.




    Submitted on 2006-06-06 21:59:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed this, it was nice to see how much compassion you have for your freinds, as well as for God. Good Job!

    -Rachie
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by Olala_Rachie | [ Reply to This ]
      this is ok. it is nice the way u did this for ur friend. u know it's always the real friends who are their for u. so u being there for him and him being there for u demonstrates a strong friendship. u have a lotta Faith and it shows in ur writing. another good one babe. struggle to breath kinda reminds me of waiting to exhale.
    | Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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