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    dots Submission Name: Memories for the Futuredots
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    Author: AngelOutlaw
    ASL Info:    21/female/OR & WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 672/392/64
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Prose/Friendship
    Total Views: 1309
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 231



    Description:
       This is about the same friend that "Your Goodbye" was originally about. This is where are relationship is now.


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    dotsMemories for the Futuredots
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    A midnight sky. A million dazzling gems. A night to freeze the heart. An irreplacable expjerience. Unforgetable magic.

    A brand new dawn. A horizon of hues. Endless tones. An infinite canvas. Incredible possibilities.




    Submitted on 2006-06-06 22:02:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww...ur all hopeful. that's sweet. so u and ur friend are apparently back on great terms so hopefully ur friendship will blossom again into something amazing.
    | Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      there's something very attractive about this piece. i think it has to do with how simple and easy the structure of it is, and yet you still manage to portray your seemingly complex thoughts. i loved the use of imagery as well, it's simple but i can see the picture. great job.

    peace.
    meredith.
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by art_is_hard | [ Reply to This ]
      this write was good but too short for me. i loved the desriptions of the sky and how it is a canvas. one day if im lucky i may get to see beyond the beautiful sky but for now the sky will do. lol.

    -brandon
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by Leon Kennedy | [ Reply to This ]


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