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    dots Submission Name: Preamble to a Debatedots
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    Author: particularshard
    ASL Info:    23/m/DC
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 1159/1392/363
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsPreamble to a Debatedots
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    Its been far too long since I felt the fire in me
    Or the oratorical flair that all the liars envy
    For my voice speaks the truth
    But silver-tongue says it well -
    Thus allowing me to sell Bic lighters in hell
    You can't unring a bell
    Or unblow the wind
    Anymore than a sinner can unsin a sin
    And I'm the Original
    The schoolin-you principal
    Not just unbeatable but practically invincible
    I'll speak you nonsensical
    Your fortress: Indefensible
    Not only are my words un-pared
    They're unminceable
    They cannot be cut down
    Not before you get shut down
    Before you get knocked to the floor,
    Sit your fool butt down.
    This will not be your touchdown,
    This will be more like a saftey
    In your impotence
    All you can hope to do is hate me
    And do your best to bait me since
    You'll never out-rate me,
    Or out-state me
    With the way I've been flowing lately
    Arr avast ye matey
    And surrender your booty
    Your best bet is to shoot me
    Or to slip me some roofies
    So I can join you in your dreams
    Cuz thas the only place that I can ever even almost be out-schemed
    Or ever be out-steamed
    You're about to get reamed
    Your colons bout to meet a verbal 2x4 beam -
    Straight up the anus
    I'll remember you when I'm famous,
    Right after I break you fast like coffee and danish.





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