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Your Healing Grace


Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
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Your Healing Grace



" Your Healing Grace"

Father as my heart looks to
Heaven to find you, I need
Your Holy Spirit to embrace
This womans heart that so much
Believes in You.

She is sick with this disease they
Call cancer,Let her spirit whirl
As Your Holy Ghost touches her
To create a beautiful dancer.

I believe you have much more for this
Precious Angel to do, I believe
You will cleanse her body because she
Truely has all Her faith in You,

As the tears stream down her
Face, Even this diease can't
Waiver her Faith from Your
Heavenly place. She truely
Believes in Your healing Grace.

You've been her guide since she
was a young lass, Lay Your Holy
Spirit upon her body dear Lord and right
Through her the cancer shall pass.


You have been Her strength in all
This madness since she was a
Teen, She is thankful for the many
Blessings you've bestoed on her
that make her life so serene.

She has enough Faith in You Father
She knows you can heal her body
Make it cancer free, But if it's her time
To go Father then with you she longs to be.


Written By: Ladymustang





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  Whatever the Father's design in this trial, your faith is what stands throught out the testing. This was a lovely prayer. The outcome is not as important as the process, which is why you are drawing closer to Him now.

Let your faith be a beacon on a hill for others to see.

I pray God will grant you more time.
| Posted on 2006-06-08 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very beautiful and i am glad that you know that jehovah does not want to see any of his children suffer that was never his purpose but through sin comes imperfection and we were all born that way it hurts and it's sad but you have to know that one day this to shall pass
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by always thinking | [ Reply to This ]
  Awesome peom, made me shed a tear. Keep up the good fight, and always place your trust in Him!

-Rachie
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by Olala_Rachie | [ Reply to This ]
  This is pretty good, there are a few kinks though
that I would like to point out. These are mostly errors as it concerns spelling. They can be found in the brackets.

Father as my heart looks to heaven
I need your Holy Spirit to embrace
this [woman's] heart,
that so much believes in you.

She is sick with this [disease]
they call cancer.
Let her spirit whirl
as your Holy Ghost touches her
to create a beautiful dancer.

I believe you have [much] more
for this precious angel [than the grave]
I believe
you will cleanse her because she
truely has all her faith in you.

As [the] tears stream down her face.
Even this disease can't
waiver her faith from your
heavenly place.
She truely believes in your healing grace.

You've been her guide since she
was a young [lass],
lay your Holy Spirit upon her body [dear] Lord [and] right through the cancer shall pass.

You have been her strength in all
this [madness] since she was a teen
She is thankful for the many
blessings you've bestoed on her
that make her life so serene.

She has enough Faith in you Father
she knows you can heal her body,
make it cancer free
But if it's her time dear Father
then with you she longs to be.

[Amen]

I got a little carried away while reading this and decide to offer some more help while going through this. But these are only suggestions and you don't have to follow them if you don't want to. I'm sorry if I went out of place there.

Cancer is no small thing. I have seen family members completely thorn away by that horrible disease. I really, really do hope all turns out well.

Take care
and God bless

Jason
| Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]
  This is absolutely beautiful
I too had tears in my eyes reading this
What I really liked is how Positive you stayed in this write never once blaming the lord for the cancer but in fact Thanking him for evreything that he has done for you
I Loved this one
This is Easily a Favorite
God Bless
Your Friend
Ron
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a very touching Prayer/poem, for I see it as a prayer and another opportunity to witness in the faith that you have in the Lord.
I will be praying for you as I know many other are probably doing the same. Keep your faith strong and trust that He always has a plan for you and a reason for everything. One person can touch the lives of many and I know that anyone who reads this will be.

God Bless and Keep you in His Grace.
jan
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
  Very good Wilma. It reads very much like a prayer and I think it deserves to be one.

Well done.

Frank.
| Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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