BIRTH by Ligeia83

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Author:	Ligeia83
ASL Info:	23/f/the literary world
Elite Ratio:	2.76 - 17/14/13
Words:	141

Class/Type:	Poetry/
Total Views:	138
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1081

Description:
Just a poem I wrote a few weeks ago...I'm not really sure about the results...

BIRTH

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It stirs-
In my head
It stirs and stirs;
This viciousness
Unresting-it is-blinds

My thoughts-unrest
Love-hate-all at once
Spin around and never stop;
Daffodils Bloom-black-
Death of the Poet-

Obscene-obscene
Cast a shadow-on my darkness
Mouthfuls of blood-
THICK
Dies excellently
For the rest of his life

The rest of her life
-My life-
Winter days never end
And it stirs
In my head

Do not believe it-
(It is deceiving-deceitful Thoughts)
My heart- the Liar
Stirs in my head
Motionlessly fast.

Unrest-unrest-
Exhausted me-
My heart-the Liar
Exhausted me.
Death of the Poet.

My life-his life-her life
Death of the Poet.
Do not believe
My heart-the Liar

Endless tears from the poet's eyes...

It cries;it cries-My heart-the Liar.

Submitted on 2006-06-07 13:28:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
It was cool, it felt as tho you'd put a bit of your self into it, but at times it became slightly repetitive. apart from that, i enjoyed it
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by Matt W | [ Reply to This ]

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