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    dots Submission Name: Laugh Now, Cry Laterdots
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    Author: In the Fire...
    ASL Info:    30/m/Orlando
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 46/121/63
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
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    dotsLaugh Now, Cry Laterdots
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    And it came to me in an instant...

    Who is to say what strings mend life
    when the world is consumed by strife.
    The Heavens open for no one anymore,
    so stop lieing to yourself.

    I've seen the pastors that drive Mercedes and Hummers while the people who so willingly give tides sleep with no food or light.

    A mighty God he is not...

    While we pray at night the youth die in the streets.

    Life has not gotten better and shows absolutely no signs of changing but for the worse.

    Only a fool follows the crowd of righteousness over the edge of life. There is no after, there is only now and what you make of it.

    I may be wrong for the things i say, but i've lived long enough to see that believing in the things unseen is childish and cruel. Hoping for the impossiblr just waits to shatter your hopes and dreams later in life.

    Until then i will laugh now and cry later. I will live my life for me and my family. Tell God to stop knocking on my door 'cause i'm not coming back. The pamphlets mean nothing to me.

    I know what the Bible says.

    And i think it's jibberish...

    Until then i will laugh now and cry later.




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      Don't change anything. Just laugh now and cry later...

    "Until then i will laugh now and cry later. I will live my life for me and my family. Tell God to stop knocking on my door 'cause i'm not coming back. The pamphlets mean nothing to me."

    I love this part,living for the moment and not ready to stop just yet. My life's more stupid and care free,still, I'm always happy. The composition of this script is... Unique.

    "The pamphlets mean nothing to me."

    You sure had me with that one....

    Pix
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is great, you've got some awesome ideas happening in here.

    If you're interested in working with it, I think you could turn this into and awesome poem, probably in blank verse. You've already got a good rhythm and meter going in some places. You should give it a try!
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by lesser_threat | [ Reply to This ]
      Fantastic and true.

    snow
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by snow | [ Reply to This ]



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