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Author: Perpetualdreamz
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Class/Type: Prose /Friendship
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It strikes me. It's over. Nothing is happening. Did nothing. To repair, to extend. Thought that was all I needed. Apparently, it was only the beginning. Now I've been replaced, been forgotten. Seen through, that's it. Saw the end. I saw fine, they saw fit. I have decided not to. Through High School, I believed that my friendship was okay, that as long as we knew each other inside long as we could have fun together...I could sit and watch it flourish. But now I know, it cannot be watered cannot be exposed to sun for a day... It needs to be constant, refreshed... I am that uptight, non-speaking person... I am that hermit. I did not turn the soil... I did not trim the bad leaves off. I did not talk to it... I did not cut it into an interesting shape... I left it...normally... nothing special. I let it grow.. eventually die... But still a memory remains. Only. *tear* ~ Teach me how to fix it

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