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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    all my life Ive searched the unknown
    for some kind of happiness but always end up alone
    where I should have gone left
    Ive always gone right
    making it that much harder
    always having to fight
    to keep being strong
    enough to hold on
    but somewhere inside I guess
    I knew the truth
    that there is no one place that
    I belong
    so I keep to myself way down deep inside
    these feelings of lonliness Ill forever hide
    why should anyone know
    its not like they care
    so I keep to myself all my
    pain and dispair.

    WRITTEN BY : CAROL SPENCER




    Submitted on 2006-06-08 01:10:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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