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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I feel so lost I dont know what to do
    it seems that even I can barely handle the truth
    the truth that sits way down inside of me
    and eats away at my soul is a reality
    a reality that I cant speak out of my mouth
    so Ive chosen to take another route
    to write down on paper what this life is to me
    but the pain that comes along with it wont
    anybody see
    for that to happen Id have to open my soul
    but I wont do it
    cant risk being hurt no more
    Its a shame that no one will ever know
    how much this pain inside me grows
    I laugh to myself cause no one can see
    behind my smile this life is killing me

    WRITTEN BY: CAROL SPENCER




    Submitted on 2006-06-08 01:14:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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