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    dots Submission Name: 5~The Emptiness Insidedots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dots5~The Emptiness Insidedots
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    as I sit here contemplating
    of the lonlieness that Ive got waiting
    slowly destroying me inside
    there is no exscape no matter how hard I try
    people pass
    and I wonder why
    they dont see my battle inside
    cant they see that Im loosing this fight within
    I really dont think Im strong enough to win
    I already know that my hope is gone
    really dont know why Im still trying to hold on
    this pride that Ive got just wont let go
    maybe its not pride but stupidity I hold
    like a knife to my fading soul




    Submitted on 2006-06-08 01:41:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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