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    dots Submission Name: 13~Sadness in my Heartdots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       BY: CAROL SPENCER


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    dots13~Sadness in my Heartdots
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    theres a sadness in my heart
    that keeps me awake at night
    it makes me feel so hopeless
    with no end in sight
    the pain that occupies my mind
    body and soul
    is something so very hard to control
    I know that I am barely holding on
    even though Ive wanted to let go
    for so very long
    I dont know theres something inside me
    that wont let me give up this fight so easily
    I guess Id rather sit here and dwell
    on all this pain Ive come to know so well
    maybe its comforting my man made hell




    Submitted on 2006-06-08 01:49:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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