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    dots Submission Name: 17~No Hope Leftdots

    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dots17~No Hope Leftdots

    man I never thought Id be going through this
    thinking of all Ive lost just gets me pissed
    how did I become so weak
    tryen not to feel it by fucken with the tweak
    I used to have alot and by now I shoud have more
    instead Ive got next to nothing anymore
    any doors that were once open
    are shut now and I just keep smokin
    there is no hope left here for me
    cause I was just to blind to see
    how dope was destroying me
    and how wrong my choices could be
    now that Ive realized
    and finally opened up my eyes
    when I look around I see pain and hurt everywhere
    all caused by me cause I didnt have the feelings to care
    or even question my actions at the time
    now here I am with tears in my eyes
    with no one around to hear my cries

    Submitted on 2006-06-08 01:52:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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