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    dots Submission Name: 19~Insomniadots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       BY: CAROL SPENCER


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    dots19~Insomniadots
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    man sometimes I dont want to close my eyes
    knowing itll be the start of my demise
    I cant believe that Im even still here
    struggeling to hold on to all I hold dear
    I dont think life is supposed to be like this
    sometimes it was even my life Ive risked
    and for what
    do I even know
    this world is like a game each life just a role
    have you ever felt inside
    that you were about to loose your life
    and you
    wernt scared to go
    but just
    scared of the unknown
    itll drive you crazy
    you might just loose your mind
    all I know is
    I hope and pray
    I dont go before my time




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