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    dots Submission Name: 20~What Ifdots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 600
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       BY: CAROL SPENCER


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    dots20~What Ifdots
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    if you could walk a mile in my shoes
    if you could handle what Ive had to loose
    if you were given the same choices to make
    I wonder which road you would take
    would you even make it to where Im at
    or would you have given up
    way before that
    would you hustle or slang just to get by
    or would you just be a feign living only to get high
    the high you get when you roll that bowl
    not giving a fuck for another living soul
    all the while saying that you can maintain
    that nothing is different that you dont feel
    no pain




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