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    dots Submission Name: 34~Raised by the Streetsdots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dots34~Raised by the Streetsdots
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    all my life
    Iíve had to fight
    raised by the streets
    I never thought twice
    about the life I chose to have
    and all the obsticals in my path
    to struggle though life
    day by day
    it never occured to me that there was another way
    always thought my sadness inside
    was only my punishment for not living right
    along the road though Iíve met some really hard times
    and I never really thought happiness could ever really be mine
    until the day I had my son
    nothing could have prepared me for that one
    the love that grew inside of me
    for this boy so small and weak
    is even stronger now and I cant help it
    I knew I was in love with him the moment I felt it
    I knew then that my life had to change
    I wouldnt keep living this life the same




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