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    dots Submission Name: 12~Scars on my Souldots
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    Author: carolspencer707
    ASL Info:    26/F/SANTA ROSA
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 5/12/34
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 590
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dots12~Scars on my Souldots
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    there has got to be a way
    or even more words to say
    sometimes its hard to express how I feel
    my pain is more than I wish to reveal
    but Ive got to let it out
    you need to know what Im about
    where Ive been and where I hope to go
    all are things I feel you need to know
    in my life Ive delt with so much
    I want my experiences to somehow touch
    anyone out there that has felt lost and alone
    never really able to call any one place home
    a lost soul floating aimlessly
    always felt like something was missing in me
    so all my life Ive tried to desguise
    the sorrow that has always shown through my eyes
    after all of these tears have been cried
    and all of my pillowcases have dried
    this torment inside me still carries on
    only expanding with every choice I make wrong




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