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The intricate silk flaters the storm
that is sure to float near soon.
The distance becomes something other
More like looming familiarity
and the assurance of it frightens me.
I simply cannot put my hands around
the absurdity of the fear,
But I fumble with it anyhow.
Then comes the thunder and I know
the weather is right here now.
I do not take shelter, because the way it validates
me is comforting.
The sickness I swim around is a soft kiss,
a wisper of flight that sets me above it,
all of it, all of you.
A faint reminder that I am better
I am good.
But the cush of my fragile mind stunts the validity
of my pure intend, and I am drowned out.
Then I have to wade in the rain awhile,
untill I get wet again.
I can't breath.
| Beautiful imagery.|
The end is quite perfect. It offsets (I've been trying to think of that word for days now!) the rest of the almost relaxed tone quite nicely.
Overall, this was a good bit.
|| Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by Janelle | [ Reply to This ] || Ok... I am not really on drugs, however at one time I did use them...alot. The drugs hae had a very bitter sweet effect on my brain. i think the use of hallucinegens have brodened the depth of how I percieve life, and thus comes out in "some" of my work. I am silly to begin with so many times I end up writing things that do not make sence to me. I repeat I am not on drugs. i was just being funny ha ha ha. sorry for the misunderstanding||| Posted on 2006-06-08 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ] || This is powerful|
My Friend I fought 5 long years with a speed addiction and I know exactly of the feeling you are describing
This write for me details a trip you have been on in your mind from the horrible effects of drugs
You wrote this well but I am sure it would have been written better if you werent under the influence
Yesterday I celebrated one year clean and sober and I did it all on my own
If you want help mits out there
If you need someone to talk to just pm me
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
|| Posted on 2006-06-08 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] |