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    dots Submission Name: To Soak In or Updots
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    Author: redthewitch
    ASL Info:    36/f/tiny rural village
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 267/175/26
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Inspired by my walk home last night, the air heavy with the scent of honeysuckle.


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    Imbibition of sticky honeysuckle
    humid sweet scent
    tempestuous thougths
    spinnnig in my head
    clinging nectar of glistening skin
    hazy soaked ecstasy
    hearts screaming within
    dripping drunken pleasure
    you and me




    Submitted on 2004-05-13 10:33:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I had visions of sticky bodies...I guess im just a pervert lol! I enjoyed reading this for the imagery it gave me and the onslught it brought to my senses. Thanks oxoxox
    | Posted on 2005-03-31 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't say i ever did this before. Drinking the sweet nectar of a flower, but after reading this piece, it makes it sound like a real good idea. I liked this one. Very descriptive and postive. Now where can i find one.....*goes looking*
    ~Aaron
    | Posted on 2004-05-18 00:00:00 | by MusingMinstrel | [ Reply to This ]
      You know, when I was a kid, I used to drink the little bauble of nectar that you find in honeysuckle if you can peel the petals off just so. And I had forgotten all about that until now.

    When I have my garden, I will have banks of honey suckle growing... I love the simplicity and sweetness of this flower, just as your poem embodies too!
    Lea
    | Posted on 2004-05-18 00:00:00 | by Learah | [ Reply to This ]


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