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    dots Submission Name: Let Freedom Ring ;>}dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 895
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1530



    Description:
       Brought to you by the letter C, the #s 1, 3, 7 and word of the day; polyvalent; having many layers, meanings, values; multifaceted.



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    dotsLet Freedom Ring ;>}dots
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    Let free will
    not cage
    our spirit
    We God's instruments
    in All
    we mirror it
    Creation, Love, Freedom

    So I'm off on a life/road trip & I'm not sure when I will have access to a computer so I wanted to just ramble 4 a minute...

    You people, you prophets, you muses, you ALL...the very fact that we all have found our way here is as the name states; Elite Skills and as the profound image shadows the feather, the sword, the pages...

    I have encountered some of the most gifted individuals and I am in a constant state of awe with the words that weave their way around here in feeling, in interpretation, in expression, most importantly engaged in Comment...the sharing is the key.

    I have been inspired by what some would name children and I say to you all; age is not a virtue...know that you are inspiring and share that...I'm sure a lot of us have been through a lot of the same dyfunctions but it serves us in strength...if it seems veiled only in pain now fear not & know all is truly well.

    Do not let society, religion and THE MAN (asexual!) have you believe that you are insane, unimportant, unintelligible, unneccesary...For you are society, religion and of MAN...Continue to uplift each other in words, praise and freedom of speech & expression.

    I thank you most graciously from the bottom of the heart of Man for which for now is our realm...Love, Peace, JOy!




    Submitted on 2004-05-13 10:54:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      not to say your wrong, because first off that's just not something you say to woman, at least bluntly. secondly opinions can't be wrong, i am referring to the classification of this piece. not that it seems unstructured but it seems more like a well comprised rant. Your constant consideration, and appreciation for this site is certaintly a characteristic more of us should have. that's not to say i, and others dodn't, but not all of us can equivatively express it in the a fashion of this like.
    | Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this piece, it is short, but if read slowly and with a strong voice, it is very powerful. Did you mean to say "We [are] God's instruments" or are you saying just what you wrote....anyway....to comment on your rambling....you are a very refreshing individual, with a very refreshing point of view. I only wish there were more people who viewed life and art in the same light. I hope you enjoy your roadtrip, be safe, have fun, and let the Earth be your doorstep.
    | Posted on 2004-05-13 00:00:00 | by legalinsane | [ Reply to This ]


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